This is a poem that I started working on a month ago. Coincidentally, it sat dormant for about a month and I have three "drafts" of it now. This one is the third draft, which I decided to put to some kind of rhyme scheme, just for the sake of forcing myself into some kind of pattern. Should probably get into the habit of that. If anyone has any interest, I will post the other "versions" though they are a lot rougher. Suggestions/ideas/etc are welcome.
It's called "acyclical" which is a word that I have coined for "something that doesn't exist in cycle (or) infinite." Excuse any heretical meanderings in my thoughts, I'm attempting to say that God didn't do what he said according to the Bible, but just came here because he wanted to be cyclical (finite). Wow--I thought that was a great title then, but now looking at it, it doesn't seem so fitting. Seems kind of random in fact. And now we view Kris's verbose two paragraphs of drivel. Sorry for that, folks. Here it is:
Though easy to reason his purpose was greater—
The powerful thundering omnipotent
Pater,
Who from the motionless throes out of time
Decided, desired, and so created a nadir.
Standing on the infinite border sublime
He cast forth his son to deliver with wine
A blessing a burden a gift with sinsear
Of purpose and passion, but queer yet benign
That people astounded perked up with their fear
To proclaim his purpose with infinite cheer
He’s come to save us all from our deaths
Because God has forgiven we sinners—
o notre pere!
Though easy to reason his purpose was greater—
The Pater the nadir the gift
le fils Christ
Descended with no greater desire nor drive
Than to live as a man, as man then to die.